Love's draws her heart
war his bow, an arrow shot
initially appears no winner
but Cupid's heart does beat
war's bow
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 20 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great write
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I like how this is wrote nice imagery.
Love always wins and it is neat how you put together love and war.
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thats a kewl poem
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Very interesting, good imagery, good write...
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Weapons used for love
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This is an interesting piece.
'Love draws her heart' as a weapon of peace
I particularly like the last part.
'but Cupid's heart does beat
war's bow'
It works well as a double entendre.
one small nit: use of two words denoting ownership in the first line Should it be 'Love draws her heart'?
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I love your take on the prompt...for war is violent and over powering...love is soft and inspiring...yet love always wins when it comes to cupid's sharp arrow...great imagery and creativity...
thank you for sharing!
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