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enveloped
by childhood dreams,
and cedar
wrapped reminiscence --
'i looked inside
close-mouthed of silence'.
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A contest entry
- quickie.... 4 U by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 15, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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gorgeous!
I love this one!
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"close-mouthed of silence"- excellent.
A short, yet very meaningful piece... excellent writing, Hensley. Congrats on the much deserved gold.
- namita
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Deeply meaningful and immensely creative ~ as usual another brilliant write from you... x
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This is my favorite ... thus far. Truly remarkable imagery.
eg ~ Steve
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