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Better Than Ever

better than ever
I hope I don't fall
I found my endeavor
avoiding the call

I can't think of reasons
cause I can't think of lies
or at least none I'd say
to your wanting eyes

so help me help you
please pull the leaver
help me make things
better than ever

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  • mandikins
    April 16, 2008
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    Simply Beautiful! love all your work. Keep um' commin!

    <3 mandy


  • Cat10
    April 15, 2008
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    like I said earlier, beautiful poem!!!