Crafted carefully each word of wonder
She graces her husband with loyalty
His rendezvous make her daydreams cower
Fantasies fade from his conspiracy
When he heard whispers of I love you so
You’d think guilt would reorganize his plan
But broken hearts slowly grow cold as snow
Pondering this once upon a time man
Unavoidable, some souls may believe
Pure love won’t shatter another love’s dream
Betrayal of trust, she now must conceive
As fabrications she bears in-between
Inhale the light intertwined with your soul
As you reap the same love, you now bestow
Author notes
Dedication Piece For A Friend.
Her Husband Betrayed Her Trust, For Another Woman.
The Beauty I Find In This Only, Is That She
Now Knows His True Colors,
And As The Healing Takes Place, She'll Find True Love!
Thanks For This Inspiring Pic
To Go With These Thoughts.. Much Love And Light.
-Timothy
In a list
A contest entry
- Life and Lies...... by Angelflower.
1060 points, ended April 19, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW this is deeply powerful and emotional. I really felt the soul of this one, and thank you for sharing this with us. Your dedication to your friend is beautiful, congrats on your HM blessings always~ Trisha
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the hardest feeling to bear is one of betray. the world does not look the same for awhile. It makes love look jaded when one heart gets broken. today world is not the same world where couple stay married and work on a relationship The movies make the other side seem so appealing. this is a wonderful write the describes many feeling. One could feel her grief of what she lost. I hope she is healing and doing better. Someday she will meet someone who is more deserving.
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Wow. What can I say? This is truly a well spoken piece of thought. Something I can unfortunately identify with as well. It is true, the one great thing that can come from such devastation is the ability to move forward - in hopes of learning to live and to love again. Amazing write!!!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Such a touching creation. Thank you for sharing your gift. Best of luck in the contest.
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It is truly the dreams he sold me on that I
find shattered all around me...
This speaks so beautifully of faith that
continues even after love becomes a memory.
Let's hope the faith brings me new wings
on which to explore a new romantic journey.
But no hurry! Love you brother...thank-you
so much for writing this from the heart
and providing a strong shoulder. Blue
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Have been in this same place in my life
Cheaters and liars are despicable and deserve nothing less than the pain they deal out
You captured thoughts and feelings very well my love brother
Wishing you all the very best!
Love and hugs,
Sandy
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"...Pondering this once upon a time man..."
Reality shattered, made make-believe.
You captured the situation artfully,
leaving a thread of hopeful light
on your closing.
A difficult topic, handled gently
and elegantly, Timothy.
Aesthete
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you have a Brilliant poem here
i wish your friend all the best
great work you did here -
Aww
Thoughtfully crafted. I wish your friend well.
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Oh.. this was so beautifully penned.. I am sorry that your friend is having to go through this.. My mother and I both have been did as well. And I feel for your friend.. You did so well in showing how it all started in a way and how it is now... I'm glad that she has a friend like you.. Well done..
Peace to you,
Jetleena
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