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Alone I blame myself!

Holding on use to be so simple
Time moves on as I stay here
Maybe it was never true
Baby I seemed to bring the worse in you
I may be lost in the addiction
But you were lost in your own pain
Never knowing whom to blame
I find myself walking solo these days
No one to listen or pretend to care
I don’t need you anymore for it is not fair
I always gave you the best wish I got the same
Even though I am alone I know I am to blame

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  • hopelessryan
    April 16, 2008
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    wow baby i am sorry that is all i have to say!


  • thetruestrockstar
    April 15, 2008
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    creative and loving

    wow i wish i had the strenth to tell my boyfriend things like that i felt this poem and i loved it

  • PoshMCRchick
    April 15, 2008
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    This is amazing! I love it.. and I can really relate


  • siddy jones
    April 15, 2008
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    this is great!
    sad that you think that you are to blame, but great
    not many writers can make me believe that they really think that they are in pain, but you can! that is a talent and i hope that you get out of pain really soon. you seem like a great person and an amazing writer. great job.


    • bangbaby
      April 15, 2008
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      thak you much dear!
      i am not so much in pain i just can point my flaws out on my own! but your comment is always good! thanks for takeing time to read!


  • Haze-
    April 15, 2008

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    I like your poem but especially this one it's hard when you know your the person you have to blame and it sucks big time.

    • bangbaby
      April 15, 2008
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      thankx much for the comment and yes it sucks a lot!but on the other hand knowing that you are at fault helps in a way for you know you are to blame and you have to fix it!


  • Lonely Christina
    April 15, 2008
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    i love it. i cant wait till u write more! good job
    -christina


    • bangbaby
      April 15, 2008
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      well thanks much dear!
      glade to know you like!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    Well Expressed.

    Sorta a lyrical flow to it, like a sad song.
    Thanks for sharing here, and reading me as well.
    I appreciate your time, and pen on. It helps.

    Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


    • bangbaby
      April 15, 2008
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      you are all to welcome and thank you for the comment.


  • ucancallmereal
    April 14, 2008
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    good write. im looking forward to reading more!


  • Angelflower
    April 14, 2008

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    Aww. this was so sad.. I'm sorry you have to go through this hun.. Everyone has felt like this once in their life.. You expressed yourself so well in this poem.. well done..
    Jetleena


    • bangbaby
      April 14, 2008
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      thank you very much for helping me
      and for takeing time to read my poem!

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