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fade away

i need to scream
i mean scream over the cliffs of an ocean
and just let it all echo out of my body
just let it drop down to the sea
drown away
let my tears take away my pain
let the wind blow in my face
let everything
...fade away

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Written December 11th, 2003

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  • Morning View
    December 13, 2003
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    ...I know the feeling. For some reason..screaming in the pillow doesn't give it the same effect, you know? Good write, though.

    Sarah


  • AllDayDreamer
    December 11, 2003
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    This is great I live about ten minutes from the beach and I have this one spot wear the waves just roar and it is so releiving just to go out the and scream my frustrations away. Its nice short and smiple I love it.