His thinking is laborious
He’s addicted to sleeping pills
He’s notorious
Thinker, sing the chorus with us
All we ask is that you let us
Chip in at your burial
(And we’ll remember you over a bowl of cereal)
I’m not John Wayne but I’m riding on
I hang’em high ‘til his wait is gone
Even if he was helped by Poseidon
He’ll fall as I sit down beside him
It’ no government “Secret of NIMH”
His ‘mind waves’ good-bye, with demented hymns
His stature…that’s slim
With his ultra-sheer skin
His attacks are weakling-thin
He thinks to himself:
“Why won’t he just let me win?”
Nah, “not by the hair on my chiny-chin-chin”
Now thought-exhaustion’s got ‘em giving in
He’s very pale
With an Achilles-shin
Crying in his wonder-bra
(I think that’s a sin)
I’m like James Cagney
I’m roasting your seat
All you can think about is:
My “White Heat”…
Author notes
This is purely for fun...AND another installment in our continuing lyrical, word-battle initiated by 'WiseWithWordz' in "The THINKER's Word Warz" at
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3997797 Hope you enjoy! (We sure are...lol).
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oh the nostalgia!
l.o.l. this was a nice trip, and funny too! good work putting 'tinker's taughts' to the test! l.o.l. you did your 'owner'(poison pen
)proud! l.o.l.
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lol...But "Thinker" is like the rat that goes around the bait without eating it (lol). "I'll get you next time Gadget...! Next time...!" (lol). Thanks for the review (belive it or not, I wasn't actually paying attention to time-lines here; just punch lines...lol).
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The rhythm here is awesome. Well written. I looked over some of the word warz and have to go back some time. Crazy beat lyrics here. Good write.
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Wow...thanks for the comments. Very encouraging. The primary thing with us in these "Word Warz" is having fun...writing exercises and having fun. Nothing too heavy (trying to 'pack-in' the laughs though...lol). Thanks for the reviews of previous, cross-refs. too. Glad you liked this.
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this is really fun. it's kinda random in places but i love random. and the originality is great. awesome write. (by the way...crying in his wonder bra? that's freakin hilarious)
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lol...Hey, thanks a million for your review and feedback. As you may have noticed, this is a (pretty long too) battle between some made-up characters of at least 4 authors on AP (including me). Since it's a "Word Warz", we keep taking jabs at each other (no one wants to give in yet...lol). Soooo...lol.
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