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night kisses

i pull back the curtain
to my dark room
seeing no sun
just how i like it
i talked with you earlier
we plan to meet
in the woods
dark and silent
i walk quickly
out of the house
dressed in the usual
black as the night sky
i told you to meet me
to tell you a secret
a secret i have told
not a soul
i meet you were was said
you lift my head with your hand
gentle your touch
you hold me in your arms
and i hold you
but now time has come
my secret revealed
i tilt my head slightly
to kiss your neck
you do not resist
my mouth opens slowly
to reveal the teeth
i bit down on your flesh
to warm and tasty
i bit harder now
to break the skin
as this feeling rushes threw me
of you crimson blood on my tounge
its iron matalic taste a releif for my hunger
i release you to see what you think of me now
do you still love me
i do not know how
when my eyes meet yours
you smile and laugh
a confused look i give you
and you stop to explain
you tell me you love me
your feelings unchanged
you kiss me so gently
and lick your lips
of blood remaining
from your body i took
you tell me your wishes
to walk hand in hand
every night forever
our love shall not die
for as long as we live
and to complete this
you promice with a bite of your own
your teeth sink into the skin of my neck
blood is drawn and then we kiss
the kiss of a lifetime
meaning so much
this love will last we say
as the sun begins to rise
we part to venture home
to our dark confines
till next sunset
we meet
and hunt
togeather
in love

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  • emoblondisgm
    May 17, 2008
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    wow tressa thats wicked kewl..... your somuch more creative than me! see ya in school monday


  • Scrawlin Scribe
    May 7, 2008
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    amazing!

    great peom and im alot like you..i read your author page XD i have major typing issues too lol XD and because of that i can read through yours lol...i dnt know if you want them pointed out or not though, dont know if that would bother you lol so XD all im going to say is amazing and i love vampires too XD


  • kaitlyn-love
    April 15, 2008

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    effing awesome. wow, this is an awesome poem, I really like the direction you've headed in with your writing!! I'd love to read more of this kind of stuff.

    <333 you!!!


    Kaitlyn