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As time flies by (Haiku)

The day's end in spring
time but sakura in wind-
on its way past us

Author notes

Time flies when you wish it would last forever

Best and worst aspects.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 16, 2008

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    How beautiful your Haiku is and how sadly true your Authors Notes are ... I know I wish the days would sometimes stop so I may cherish them like my wedding day but alas time goes even faster

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda