Image credit The Art of Margaret Dean
Time rejoices as it passes
fluttering chronicled wings in joy;
pasts blending into present,
futures marking history,
life living love.
Each passing
hands to the other
the gentle knowledge of self.
Every touch, a miracle
granting sepia tones,
coalescing and meshing,
muting ocular shouts to one language,
one petal in a magic bloom.
Author notes
10 Entries
10 Lines (more or less)
A contest entry
- ~* What Do You See? *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended April 18, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This written so well, thanks for sharing and congrats on the silver
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ckwriter69
Thank you.
I am so pleased you enjoyed this poem. ~Pamela 
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Ha! I love this line! "muting ocular shouts to one language",pleasentries from the peepers is so cute!And hey,congrats on the Silver too. This piece shatters timelines in mixing past,present,future in all relating. Very nice work Lady!
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suseann
Thank you so much for your kind comment. I appreciate it very much and am pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thank you again. ~Pamela
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Integral
This piece tugged at my Heartstrings and swelled the eyes
I read several times and kept seeing like a box...with trinkets in it...Looks like watch...
pictures and letters....
Looks like a hat box...
being shown a heart shape...
whether meaning Love or Love letters etc..
Seeing a closet...
and suit...looks like a man's suit...
Wedding album~
and strange as it may sound....
like a wagon covered carriage~ horse pulled
reference to going to the new country...
hearing word: ancestors
Powerful images You have shared~~
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Each passing
hands to the other
the gentle knowledge of self.
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire
Thank you so much for that wonderful and amazing review and a shiny silver trophy on this piece.
I am so pleased considering the wonderful entries. Thank you so much. It is always a pleasure to be part of your contests. ~Pamela
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WOW!!! your words never cease to amaze me.
Your style is always so graceful and beautiful
Delila
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Delila
Thank you. I am so pleased you enjoyed this one. ~Pamela
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so so sweet
I love your writes like this! you are my inspiration my friend!
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Richard
Always so positive with your kind comments my friend. Thank you so much. ~Pamela
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this is truly breathtaking... wonderful job.
these lines are... WOW...
pasts blending into present,
futures marking history,
life living love.
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going nowhere
Thank you. I am so pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thank you. ~Pamela
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Connections. Everything's connected in our lives forming one giant circle ending sooner than later for
some, but all connected. And we are all an integral part of it. This is how I interpret this wonderful poem.
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Richard
Thank you so much. I always love when you comment on my work. ~Pamela
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As I read a warm nostalgic feeling flowed over me and I remembered the path from my aunt's house to the beach where I used to play as a child.
Your poem is so beautifully expressed.
Margaret
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Emerald Eyes
Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate them very much and am so pleased you enjoyed thsi piece. ~Pamela
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