It has been a year,
since God called me home
But don't worry Mommy
because you're never alone
I got my Angel wings
and then I took flight
To watch over you and Dad
In the daytime and night
I am always here, beside you
I hear your prayers and I miss you, too
Author notes
Artist Margaret Dean-2005
In a list
A contest entry
- ~* What Do You See? *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended April 18, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold IV - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended May 6, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Welcome!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: I'm Still With You, Mommy
This piece tugged at my Heartstrings and I read several times and kept seeing word: cousin...
now ...like a young child...
and bizarre as it sounds...
name: Kimberly...what sounds like Kimberly
and seeing a park with trees...
oak...and word: walnut...
Swells the eyes
Wonderful images You have shared~~
These lines grabbed and pulled~
I got my Angel wings
and then I took flight
To watch over you and Dad
In the daytime and night
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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BEAUTIFUL!
This is a touching work and I know you wrote this from your heart. Not easy to lose a loved one. You did an inspirational job by sharing this. THANKS AGAIN JEREMI!
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