Listen to the sound,
Of our hearts beating.
Look inside myself,
I am bleeding.
Reach inside my head,
You only find more,
Hurt and hell,
That I endure.
Grab my silk soft neck,
Twist it far.
Breaking and snapping,
Sounds so good right now.
Twisted memories,
They truly haunt me.
Dusk till dawn,
My mind is gone.
Listen now,
I’m Breaking Beauty,
The time has arrived,
I come undone.
Whispering in your ear,
You only hear,
The beating of my heart,
Has stopped.
Dusk till dawn,
The time is gone,
Listen to Breaking Beauty,
Now.
Snapping bones,
Eruption flows,
In the closing veins,
Ends this life.
Smile on my face,
Crying in my heart,
Look inside this body,
It’s fallen apart.
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beautifuly dark and raw I like this one
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wow
i love this!
its beautiful!
someone who may look so put together and perfect
with this broken inside
its amazing cuz it happens so much.
it seems like they have this perfect life and none of it matters cuz they are broken on the inside hurt and crying out for help love effection
and just one moment of pure bliss!
great write (:
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A very beautiful, work or words. You weaved them together like something I would only expect for you. You, your words, your everything are beautiful. I miss you and I love you lots.
"Smile on my face,
Crying in my heart,
Look inside this body,
It’s fallen apart."'
These lines worded anyother way would be the biggest cleche ever, but my love this was perfecty amazing. GReat ending to a wonderful begining.
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A cascade of words, building and crashing, I feel through my bones. Beautiful in pain and very vivid off the page. You have a way with words.
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so i decided to take a look at your other poetry. and i am so glad i did! this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have read in a long time.
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This is some good quality dark poetry right here. But, as usual, my natural curiosity has kicked in, causing me to wonder what inspired it. The subtle rhyming in this great, almost as if it were accidental, and the equally subtle repetition of the title throughout the poem was skillfully done as well.
"Dusk till dawn
My mind is gone"
That's my absolute favorite part
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sister this just sounds so down for how you said you were feeling earlier. will still worry, you know.
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