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Soap? (Carcrash)

Carnal demons fleet to the edges of my mind
The remnants of what once was a home
Now an apathetic dwelling
Scattered hesitation unbound by lack of regret

Time may bend as it will, but the hour glass still runs out

When our thoughts die what have we then
Clocks back to zero
A duration of what we wasted

Define value without words
Then listen to the screaming heart beat of a human being

How is your sanity now?
Mortality starting to sink in?

Nothing can wash away what we've done
The head on collision of a beating heart and a dying mind
All wrapped up in a car crash.

Deep breaths and bedtime prayers can't save you now.

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My mind can't be cleaned, my thoughts can't be washed away.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    Humm..very much curious verse bringing the many questions around..I love the depth..and my thanks for entering such a wonderful write in my contest...