A tender kiss
As ruby lips touch upon
Rustic flesh
Passion bubbling
Surfacing
Fresh and Crisp
Cool as the mountain spring
Two souls unite
Forming one spirit
In the dance of love making
Heat on Heat
Flesh on flesh
Two Souls
Dancing
Never ending
One spirit
Please tell me what you think
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Just had to drop by and read some of your work ... still think you capture the spirit of this poem beauitfully like a good bad girl can..
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Beautifully penned poem. I loved the flow and imagery, as well as the emotion, movement and color in this writ. A most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing
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Lovely Poem
This was so lovely. Your words were so full of love and danced off the screen. This was a pleasure to read and brought with it a big smile. A very happy poem indeed.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Oh wow!! This is beautifully soft and so sensual. Lordy girl, good bad girls know how it is done! Fantastic write. I miss you!


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SO LOVELY!!!
As two in love bring to each other feelings of devotion and caring they feel their very souls are joined together forever.


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Now this is just how it should be ...good bad girls know this that when you love and become entwined it is souls' essence blended into one being on complete and whole being
beautiful hun so sweet romantic you just capture the moment in time like a moonbeam dancing across the sky in a blink it could be gone but once you hold it in your hand you know what it is and you want to keep it for your very own...beautiful hun thank you for the pleasure of your words.


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