Running, running, breathless and faint
Screaming, screaming, give in to constraint
Longing, longing, for love bound restraint
Chains, chains, around me they bind
Shackles, shackles, my soul now entwined
Captivity, captivity, breaching my mind
A listless existence amidst viscious insistence
Where passionless kisses are felt from a distance
And persistence is useless against its resistance
This land of dark brooding
Where we dwell is deluding
These courses now force me to come to concluding
I live to be free and wild at my choosing
Not subject to ravings of Hatred's accusing
The binding of Love opens hearts for the losing
Below in this dungeon where souls live austere
I plot my escape to be free with my Dear
Winds of change blow and the time is now near
In a list
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A contest entry
- the continuing war between love and hate by Cerbie20.
680 points, ended May 10, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PW Party by Blooming Poet.
425 points, ended July 23, 2008, 117 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love is truly amazing. as is yer talent.
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I like this annd as i said before normally rhyming does not float my boat but this poem really did seem like a good rhmying poem
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wow.. this was just so amazing!! the rhyming was just beyond anything that I've read or seen..lol. You amaze me everytime I read something or yours.. You are truly a wonderful poet!.. Best of luck hun..
Jetleena
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great job with your rhyming! these stanzas are my favorite:
Running, running, breathless and faint
Screaming, screaming, give in to constraint
Longing, longing, for love bound restraint
Below in this dungeon where souls live austere
I plot my escape to be free with my Dear
Winds of change blow and the time is now near
they showed me the most emotion, and they were great with the rhyming, really good. great job! and good luck.
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A reasonable wish, "to be free with my Dear", is it not?lol.This poem speaks volumes to me,and it is somehow scary at the same time in that im am having issues of the heart. To me this poem speaks to open oneself up to that one person, especially in the end of it.Thank you very much for this write, my friend.
Kudos,
Hidden
And P.S. I love the Rhyme
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Wow
To actually make me smile... tis rare...I am in love with this poem... unique..yet all awesome... wow
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if u liked that one, read part III
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Captivated
I think this is one of the best I have read today, yes, it is THE best of the bunch. You possess great skills, we are not worthy....
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wonderful work. i enjoyed reading it. nice job with the rhyming and keeping it an even flow the whole way through.
spreading love to your page,
miley -
wow that was so cool!! it was awesome i loved it great job!
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