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Falling Asleep To Never Wake

standing
        on the edge
        the world flows away
        melts behind me
nothing
        underfoot only
        air to the left, right
        above and below
leaving
        only me,
        my crippled mind,
        my tattered soul
falling
        no support
        no stop
        no help
ending
        I squirm
        I scream
        I never wake
dying
        painless
        care free
        terrifying

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  • Tigris
    April 27, 2008

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    This style of poetry is intriguing. With simply words you tell a fearful story of death, which is as you end it , terrifying. Thank you for your entry.


  • InRegardsToMyself
    April 14, 2008
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    Really good...
    I felt this one....no lie
    great job.