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Jigsaw puzzle

Missing image

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jumping through the hoops of life

In the rain of your soul

Gone through the thunder of your mind

Sweet is the life within

All the hope that resided, gone

Watching the dreams of yesteryear

 

Pounding fears

Under the bridge

Zeal with the dreams

Zipper of the mind

Lost in the control

Everlasting fear

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  • Dark Otter
    October 29, 2008
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    Wonderful acrostic!

    some really good metaphors here.


  • Plastic Dreams
    April 17, 2008

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    hmm. i'm not used to acrostics but none the less this kept me quite entertained. i like the idea of dreams and minds that float alike in emotion. but everlasting fear is saddening. great write.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 16, 2008
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    Acrostics are not easy to write sometimes especially with letters like 'x' and 'z' but you have used them so effortlessly and easily they just keep the flow of the poem going ... Fantastic

    Best of luck in the contest
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Silly Rabbit.
    April 15, 2008
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    Wow, Abby. usually I don't like these kind of poems because they just don't sound right. But this... This one I love. It all flows together.. so wonderfully... I don't know how you do it but you did a great job and good luck in your contest.
    ♥