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Sight Seeing Sojourn

Traversing trails,tripping the light.
Sojourning spirits, free wheeling flight.
Inhaling empyrean breeze on the way,
On a simpatico trek here today.

Enjoyment of weather,and of a view.
Mesmerizing up high, fresh clear & new.
Come as a stranger,leave here a friend,
To all encountered,strolling round a bend.

Site seeing sojourn, where memories are made.
Lightens my spirits,shared with you here today.


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Artist Margaret Dean-2005
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2400489

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    Congratulations

    Well done with this. I am just thrilled to see a trophy adorn this verse. Wonderful work. ~Pamela


  • Desire gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Sight Seeing Sojourn
    This piece tugged at Spirit and while reading I kept seeing Pixies...but more than one...
    like fluttering around and strange but I kid You not...
    Chitty Chitty Bang Bang...I was seeing images
    from that movie while reading Your words
    Love the images You have shared~~

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    Enjoyment of weather,and of a view.
    Mesmerizing up high, fresh clear & new.
    Come as a stranger,leave here a friend,
    To all encountered,strolling round a bend.
    Magnificent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • secberm
    April 15, 2008

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    Jeez! WHERE DO YOU LIVE? Why is it when I read you I feel so light and airy? I feel like skipping through a meadow and picking daisies... Write on sister. One.

    Dez


    • suseann
      April 15, 2008
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      In a fantasy of the mind Dez. Based on the image provided in the contest. I'd better add a link I suppose. Although it's inspired by places visited in life and people encountered too. I do.... love to travel and see new places too. My fav thing to do. Thank you for reading.

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Loved the rhyme in this with perfect meter and flow. Your message is terrific to the image prompt. Just lovely. ~Pamela

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