I'm one of the billions.
Just trying to survive.
On a messed up world.
With a unfair life.
Hoping
but never getting.
A contest entry
- A Wrong World Turned Worse by MusicMattnessLives.
475 points, ended June 10, 2008, 38 entries
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wow
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OMG freaky boogers, I love this poem. It is totally how I am feeling right now. Life sucks and all one can do is just deal. I'm waiting for something to give and nothing ever does. I know that I am not the only one who feels this.
So short, but so true.
And, I love the flow.
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I understand. A few words that say so much. It's really sad considering how short it is.
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simple, yet, it makes a point!
I loved it! jordyn thats totally ur best 1..its so simple but it like.. speaks 2 the world about life! -
Truth
I've had a rough past so I know what this is like. You're always asking or begging for something better to come along and it seems it never happens. Yet now I've got myself into a better life so in time all things do work out for the better. You'll just have to wait and see.
This is an excellent poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Have a great day.
God Bless.
~Only1love4ever -
wow. short and sweet. very blunt. however, i believe thats a good thing. i really enjoyed reading this poem. so true. this world is so messed up and we can't do anything about it. however, we have to try. best of luck and good write.
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I hate it when I don't get any chocolate too. 
I'm such a mean person... I'm thinking that you aren't getting an un-messed up life. If I could say it... I think everybody's life is messed up. George Bushes is getting there, but not quite. Soon it will be, though. 
Sorry... I'm not a big fan of him. This was a great poem, even though it was small. Great work!
-Beyond Da` (Awsome) Craziness
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