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I Wander

I wander in places in the woods.
I'm in a field of dead and people with hoods.
One carries a scythe and another holds a blade.
I search for ways to leave, or even escape the from the tracks I made.
Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
I can't seem to get away from the fury.
Get me outta here!
I don't like these monsters, who are drawing near.
Mommy, Daddy; help me!
But before I can give up hope, I found the key.
The answer is to find happiness and love.
Like a peace-loving dove.
Suddenly, I realized that I'm not awake, but dreaming.
Things can't happen like this, I'm seeming.
I wake up and everything was okay.
And that's all I can say.
Because nightmares and dreams are versions your brain makes.
If you have nightmares like this, do you have what it takes?

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  • Chrysalis
    June 23, 2008

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    your rhyming scheme is amazing... I get so easily fascinated with poems that rhyme that’s cause I can’t rhyme myself. 13th line was my favorite. To dream but to be awake... something really new. Liked it
    Thanks for your comment have a blessed day!
    -Blanche


  • Princess Peach
    April 16, 2008

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    this is great, friend! ^_^ i promise i will be in school tomorrow, i just didnt feel like going in today lol! what inspired u to write this poem! im glad u decided to write another poem, because this poem is great! ^_^ see u in school tomorrow! ttyl! ;-)