It’s a skeleton,
Bearhugging you in the dark.
Struggling to snuff out your red
And liquefy your you –
To smoosh the pulp of your humanity,
Juice it down through the drain cover
‘Til it piddles into absence.
To leave only unshatterable epidermis
For it to climb into,
Cozy up to the locals,
And live as you...
A pianist of tendons.
Please tell me what you think
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Heh, that "pianist of tendons" is a great line. Recommendation here would be change period to either colon or ellipsis in the preceding line--
Cozy up to the locals,
And live as you...
A pianist of tendons.
This rocks!
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Ya know... I thought I had it that way. >.<
That's how it was meant to be, and I guess I just saw my typo as what I expected it to be. Thanks for catching it!
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