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Angel

Dear Angel,

I have so many questions for you.
So many things I wish you knew,
Angel, please, tell me what to do!

Why do I hurt? Why do I cry?
Why do you affect me so?
Why am I wasting my time with this?

Your eyes, they still pierce me.
Your voice, it still calls me.
Your existence, oh how it kills me!

Angel, oh Angel, tell me please!
Why do you have this power over me?
I just cant move on, believe me, I've tried.

Angel, release me, please, I beg you.
Free me from your wings!
Heal my broken heart and let me be.

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    November 8, 2008

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    AWW this is such a beautiful write, yet its so sad. your last stanza was really touching, and it felt like you were crying out to have freedom. keep penning, this poem was really intense


  • Forgotten Promises
    April 14, 2008

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    Very cool whos the angel u speak of tho lol u dont have to tell me im j/w well keep up the work♥