cant you hear
the crap in my head
drizzling on to the paper
dont feel you feel bad
for all of the times
you denied to lend me your favor
these u-turns arent legal
and the takebacks aren't free
for all of the times you were looking at me
i let you know
givers dont win... [cause all of the takers lie]
A contest entry
- the first thing to spill off your tongue by Plastic Dreams.
460 points, ended April 24, 2008, 19 entries
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i let random sentences pour out for this one lol
Comments
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yessssssssssssss. PRIME example of what i needed. it seems all writers think the same to begin. a jumble that spaciously finds way to what is really bothering us.
the takebacks aren't free.
all of the takers lie.
you have quite a few lines that stand out. as for a free write, thank you for actually do so. finalist.
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