On The Path To Heaven
late afternoon glowing,
soft and mellow
flutterings of innocence,
poised for flight
sun-kissed cheeks blushing,
tiny feet encrusted
with crystal grains of sand,
ready to go home
"will someone show me where to go
I seem to have lost my way"
Author notes
Artist Margaret Dean-2005
10 Lines (more or less)
A contest entry
- ~* What Do You See? *~ by Desire.
700 points, ended April 18, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations
So pleased to see gold on this wonderful poem. I loved it the first time, and I still do. Excellent work.
~Pamela 
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: On The Path To Heaven
This piece tugged at my Heartstrings for the message touched deep and certainly is Powerful
Beautiful words weaved and for some reason I kept seeing a small dog...read it several times
and same image...
looks like close to a little Terrier...but I am not versed in my canines...darkesh brown/black with the cutest face
Love the emotions You have shared~~
Brings tears to the eyes
These lines grabbed and pulled~
sun-kissed cheeks blushing,
tiny feet encrusted
with crystal grains of sand,
ready to go home
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Such a beautiful, enchanting poem. I actually felt like the child myself.Your imagery and empathy are just wonderful.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Ahhhh, shades of the yellow brick road...
I loved this. So soft, so tender. Delightful. Well done. ~Pamela
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Lovely dear, so soft and serene, and best of luck in the contest dear.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Good luck Ma'am
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Thank you, sweetheart
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