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His Fool.

This is the story of a girl so sad and alone,
for the sins she commited against herself she will never atone.
Once a happy young girl with opportunity, once a girl with grace…
she gave it all up, and fell flat on her face.
What was once innocent enough soon became real,
he’d touched her soil in ways she’d never thought another could feel.
I’ve watched him cheat and I’ve watched him lie.
I’ve witnessed the battles and I’ve witnessed her cry.
The tragedy goes on, ever so slow,
and never once would she say to him “not anymore – no!”
I gave up insisting and I went on with my life,
but I never stopped watching that ever-failing strife.
That girl I once loved soon became no more
he’s stolen away and broken everything – right down to her very core.
She said she’s in love but will she ever know
what she really should have done was let him go.
Forever he did cheat and forever he did lie
and many, many years just passed right on by.
And now, in this future, as you lay in your empty bed
you’ll toy with that wedding band… and you’ll know in your head –
he’s in another woman’s bed.
You’ll sit down like always and instead just write what you feel
because on your lips you’ve placed a permanent seal.
My love for that girl will never end
She meant more to me than she ever meant to him – that, she’ll never comprehend.
You say you’re in love, but you’re too young to see
you don’t mean as much to him as he makes it seem to be.
There’s a difference between wanting to learn and the pain – just taking
for it’ll always be with me – this pain – that you’re sharing.
I’ll step back for now but I won’t lie to you.
I’ll always remind you of all he does to you.
Neverending was the story of how she was used as a tool;
she will remain forever… his fool.

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Not a very good poem, I wrote in a few minutes... but hell, i figured I'd write something about certain shiiiatt.

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  • Cerbie20
    May 13, 2008
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    and btw... i do have respect for myself... at times... and i should have listened to you britty... dont let that get to your head... i love this poem a lot... can i print it off and hang it up in my locker? if anything is to remind me of how stupid i was, this would be it...

  • Cerbie20
    April 22, 2008

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    yeah, you speak a lot of truth in here... i know what you mean that i am his fool... its just that i try to believe the best in everyone... and just so you know, i do know that i mean more to you than to him. you are my best friend, my sister, and if anything, my soul mate... in a friend way. he is just some guy that will continue to hurt me like all the others... doesnt mean that i will give up though. im stupid like that, but im determined to find the best in him. love you britty


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    Its still a great write even if ot only took a few minutes. It sounds like a close friend of your has a problem though. If this poem is based on reality. The center of that person problem though is they have no respect for theirselves.


  • Ryah
    April 14, 2008
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    This is a great poem. I really liked it.


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    April 14, 2008
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    hey

    this was pretty good. excellent write!!!! <3 YAY!

    ~banana <33

    • Pretty Britty
      April 14, 2008
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      Hey thanks for the comment, loveburger!
      Most of my writes are MUCH better, but this one was just something I needed to get off of my chest lol

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