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What Ever

I don't care what you think of my writing
I will write what ever the hell I feel like.
So what Ever.

if I piss you off then so what,
I must write what i feel and I feel Mad as hell.

How dear you site in a little group with your friends
and talk about me behind my back,
Hears a thought how about giving me a call,
and tell me how you feel about my poems.
so I'm saying,
I don't care and What Ever to you....

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I am mad and don't care...

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  • Plastic Dreams
    April 17, 2008
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    Grumpy

    just plain grumpy. i can only take this so serious with the butterflies on the sides. this is partially ironic. like a lil girl huffing and puffing but fogetting to blow down. but none the less, this is what i've asked for... and have recieved. touche. and well done on giving a great personality.


  • lightswitches
    April 14, 2008

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    This is okay for at least you were able to vent, and this is more important at certain moments. Like at times your self esteem may even mean more than such things as correct spelling.
    In addition, if you don't care, then why is this poem a featured item?

    Nonetheless, if these people call you. Then don't present your poems because they sound like mean bastards.

    good day