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Push through the skin

I try hard
To push through the skin
I think to myself
If I do this the demons will win

They will take a hold of me
Squeeze with all their might
I can't do anything to stop them
They just hold on so tight

They tell me things
That I don't want to hear
About this life I have
And everything I fear

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    We all fight our own demons and often find ways, (such as writing) to release them...this is very deep and full of pain...wonderfully written...
    Best to you!
    mystic


  • attack110
    April 15, 2008
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    Good

    I enjoyed your poem but I was wondering if you had any meaning behind it, I wasn't quite sure what it was that were referring to. Still very provocative (I think that's the word)


    • Leanna-bean
      April 15, 2008
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      To tell you the truth it really doesn't have much meaning to it. I think I might have wrote it because I was tring not to cut myself. Thanks for the comment!