Its 1:00 and i cant sleep
Its 1:00 and i cant sleep
i have been tossing and turning
my eyes so restless
thinking of you
i try to sleep, but your face is an image in my mind
I think about your face, i think about your voice and i think about how happy you can make me feel. I wish that you were mine. Everything reminds me of you. It hurts deep inside. because i cant have you. tears in my eyes. i love him. does he love me back. Dream becomes reality. seeing you all of the time makes it hard to forget you. It would kill me for me to see you with someone else.
YA this was my first poem i have written, so remember that when commenting
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WOW
IVE BEEN FEELING LIKE THIS MYSELF LATELY!
THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
ITS SO MUCH EMOTION, SO REAL , AND EVERYONE HAS HAD AMOMENT LIKE THIS!
THIS IS DEEP, AND FOR THIS TO BE UR FIRST POEM..
THIS WAS WONDERFUL...LIKE THEY SAY ON THE MCDONAls commercial "im lovin it"
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ohh really! thankyou!
i'll check out ur poems too!
tALK TO YOU LATER! XD
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