Karma has taken me over.
I have found myself in the pool of eternal joy.
i hear sounds that ease my hardened heart,
and kindle my soul.
the boundaries that had separated us,
they are now piles of dust.
in this new world all things are possible,
with your guidance I can do the impossible
I must only believe in your strength and compassion
A contest entry
- Write a poem for me~ by MysticalRayne.
575 points, ended April 16, 2008, 8 entries
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What do you think?
Comments
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i believe in karma!!! i love the first verse! i want to be in a pool of eternal joy wouldnt that be nice! Also like and kindle my soul!
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this is soooo sweet!!
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I'ts funny. when I wrote it i had the song "Within You Without You" stuck in my head. But I guess it is sweet.
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This is beautiful and very sincere thank you so much for you entry ~ it just made me sit here and go awwwwwww.
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