Why would you push the clouds away?
They only hide the sun for a second
And then they are gone
And rays of gold
Stream from between cracks
In the fluffy white curls of the clouds above
A beautiful sight to see
Would you also want to push away
The thoughts and dreams of what may never be
But that could be someday?
Would you push them away with those clouds
That may bring an angel your way?
I have not walked the same streets
Nor walked my own streets near as long
But I do know
That you can never push the clouds away
And I would never want to
Author notes
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A contest entry
- written for the gist of love by sidewinder.
1400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 55 entries
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Comments
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Wow!
Very good. I love clouds. I would really like to just sleep on one, or 7. lol. Why would anyone want to push them away??
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beats me
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