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Broken Heart (long version)

Broken heart you cry.
Begging for my pity to you,
Begging for my guilt.
Instead anger gleems my mind
As I rip your ribs apart
so that your heart is an easy reach.
Torn from its nest and strewn accross the table,
I'll show you a broken heart -
With needles pieced in
and one giant knife to finish it off
I'll show you a broken heart.

Author notes

it's easier when it's longer.... shhh Carli don't say anything

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  • StroonsGreen
    April 20, 2008
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    Hmm

    Holy crap Alex. That is dark.
    However, love can be dark and deadly as well, so well done:]