Waiting to be unleashed; finally here
blink of an eye; maturity.
surreally authentic;
they ameliorate.
Lost in vanity; finally there
jack of all, master of one,
bewitching and deceiving;
with reluctance, they palliate.
Strangling web knit; finally unfair
malevolent clutches;
you reap what you sow,
you pay until you’ve paid;
malignant clutches.
Now they can’t befriend.
Yellow lemons and green chilies;
Green chilies and yellow lemons.
Author notes
This poem may seem to be very simple but has a great message in it. And the essence of the poem actually lies in green chilies and yellow lemons. if you are unable to guess how, do let me know....
A contest entry
- Poetic Challenge Group... ONLY!!! by luckynsincere.
600 points, ended April 28, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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whoooohooo. nice work on this. I love it. The ramble is actually perfect sense.
I like that you chose an incredibly unique theme and stayed with it 
WE learn many many lessons, yet we still fail to understand all the meanings...lol.
I think this is one great piece of poetry.
Mel
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Fantastic word play. But I am lost, have no idea what it is about whatsoever! Glad I am not the only one
Superbly penned, good luck
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Looking forward to knowing the truth...hehe ~
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Holy crap!
Am I going dumb, or what????
I can not grasp this write.....well, I can guess at your Theme, but I hate guessing.....OY!
Another abstract write from another great writer :)
I have to admit, I only have the IQ of that bug crawling up your leg right now, but most of the time I can see right through a write with no problem at all ~
I will not lie.....I do not know what this about.....sniffles*
Let me know after the contest, and then I'll give you clappers ~
I know the lines are great....the words are deep and well chosen.....but you have me here....Grrr ~
Bear ~
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