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Rock of Peace

My feet are leading me over the threshold of inner-respect and through the doors to the freedom I’ve always wanted...

My feet are leading me to people I’ve never loved, to places I’ve never understood, to completion...

No rock of peace untouched.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    This is a nice image of a spiritual journey, threshold, door, path through people and places to completion, no rock of peace untouched. I like it, somehow soothing and hopeful.


  • lovelight05
    April 14, 2008

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    I like this poem. I love the ending "no rock of peace untouched"

    Well done on this poem it's really good. Great title as well.