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[ They are all heroes to me, ]

They are all heroes to me,
row upon row of battalions
laid out in horizontal formations,
dressed in fine wools
and bedecked with ribbons.

Here where their youth
moulders into rot,
underneath occasional
flags and flowers,
and endless crosses of white,
where they were crucified,
for some glorious cause,
long forgotten.

There are no explosions,
or bullet's whines
inside these gray metal coffins
where the only sound heard
is the tumble of the bones,
crumbling to dust.

The unknown dead

are the saddest,
no names mark their final
real estate on this planet,
a resting place to tuck them away,
as twenty-one shots are fired
in tribute to their passing.

Do they quiver or tremble
at those final blasts
when their spirits
hover over the grave.

Over 4,000 currently reduced
to hamburger as blind leaders
secure a foothold for oil,
in the Middle East,
will we remember them
when we pump carbon fuels
into our tanks
that do not kill
but simply transport us
to places they will never go.

Can you name even one who died,
picture his or her face,
shed a tear for their loss,
if so then you are a patriot.

I know of many
who took my place,
when the bullets went astray
bullets that held my name,
then changed their mind,
in a time not that long ago for me
but forever for them.

I broke the aluminum bracelet
of Major William H.Condit
that I had worn for many years,
as a reminder of his status
as a POW-MIA from Vietnam.

Shot down in the 60's
held prisoner for.....
God knows how long,
died in captivity,
and his bones were returned
sometime around 1997.
hope in shattered
shiny red pieces
adorned his grave that day,

And of another,
who recently died,
riddled with cancers,
he spoke of dreams to me once,
in colors that were magnificent,
but agent orange rusted them away.

He was a poet, unpublished,
because no cared
for his poems of war,
I hold some here,
haunting words
of another time,
another futile war,
that ground up 58,000 men,
before troops were withdrawn,
and chaos ensued.

History is a repeating echo,
that whispers softly through
the trees at Arlington,
and falls on deaf ears,
in the halls of the capital,
and in the hearts of
our commanders-in-grief.

Pray for peace,
and remember the fallen,
for they remembered you
when they breathed their last,
some clutched the flags
that you cross your hearts for,
before sucking down beer,
and chili dogs at
the baseball and football fields.

They took the flaming
shrapnel of death
in your place,
how often have you visited
their place,
where the quiet is so loud,
that you can actually
hear the whispers
of what could have been
rustling restlessly
in the well groomed grass.

It emanates daily
from the depths
of our nations
expendable losses
spent in lost causes,
even now as I write this poem.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Artis












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  • Silly Rabbit.
    July 4, 2008

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    i agree. these young men and women are all heroes fighting in a war that is killing them off before their dreams and lives are fulfilled. all in all well penned, thanks for sharing and keep up the good work


  • AdamAdkins
    June 4, 2008

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    first off, just plain amazing writing. Very powerful and emotional.

    Second, I DO agree with your underlying themes here. I always love poetry that has Something to say. (a lot surprisingly doesnt)


  • Reset Button
    June 4, 2008

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    Gold trophy indeed!

    I am not going to sit here and belittle your points on government and what not because it is mostly corrupt and there's no arguement there.

    Your poem is AMAZING.

    I am left speechless which is quite the feat. I am usually most amorous with my words but yours have begulied mine and I am left with a pitiful AMAZING. You have extraordinary talent and I love this poem. You are going in my favorites. Spread the love!

    Yink


  • butterflywriter
    June 4, 2008
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    WOW!!! thank you for sharing

    beautifully put


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    June 3, 2008
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    Extremely Poignant


    I can't say I agree with the underlying opinion that all wars are futile, particularly when evil men like Hitler, Mussolini, Hussein, et. al., are given the end they deserve, but there is no denying that this is excellently and poignantly written.

    I also don't agree that the Iraq war is about oil. The best thing the U.S. could have done if it wanted unlimited access to oil at the best price would be to abandon Israel to appease OPEC and the Saudi royal family, not piss off every Muslim in the Middle East. War anywhere in the M.E. actually goes against U.S. oil interests, which is one of the reasons the price of gas keeps rising in the U.S.

    Please check out this article if you get a minute and let me know what you think -
    http://home.uchicago.edu/~gbecker/Businessweek/BW/2003/03_17_2003.pdf

    I don't mean to be argumentative. My mind is open and pliable. Just sharing a few thoughts. Again, your writing is superb.

    Mark



    • artis
      June 3, 2008
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      Hitler died by his own hand, sadly, I would have skinned him alive, then soaked him in gasoline, and then burned him an inch at a time. Mussolini could have been taken out with a sniper bullet, the same as hussien and Obama bin laden Hussien died but bin laden laughs on, under the bumbling handling of george bush, who thought he could get a foothold in the Middle east to protect oil interest, that was his administrations quote...not mine. And how could we abandon Israel, If we won't abandon Iraq. Sacrifice their country and lives for oil? I would rather pedal my as to work. Our Comm,ander-in-grief thought he could pull off an easy win, after he failed to capture bin laden, A very expensive publicity stunt, proven by his mission accomplished dance on the aircraft carrier. This was after the lies about weapons of mass, and the many subsequent mishandlings of body armor, troop usage, disbanding the Iraqi army, then paying them to fight for us, as well as against us. Inadequate Humvees, so many men died in his stupid rush to war, I blame Congress and the Senate too, but I blame us most, for being decieved again. None of that matters when you consider the 29,000 maimed, the over 4,000 dead, and the brain injured,and the burned, and scarred forever men, who will never be hired, and the dragging on of a complete lost cause,
      I know you are a republican, it leeches from your words, but I am not a party member, I am simply an American. I do not understand the mentality of screwing around with elections by having republicans vote falsely, Rush Limbergers crap, or sitting on your hands when you have the democratic majority after promising to end the war, bring men home and find some better measures of security here. Lies, and half truths and years spent trying to become the next deciever. I am sickened by the dodging of what needs to be said, by McPain, Hilarity, and Oh Blah ma. Let the next kid home from Iraq, be our president, he can learn on the job, Bush did. Sorry for the rant, I am past being deaducated....but I appreciate your comments, and your optimism and your faith in your party. Peace to you and yours, I would die for that. ~Artis

      • Mark Rickerby gold member
        June 3, 2008

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        I'm independent, actually. I just have a built-in resistance to criticize war efforts when we're already knee-deep in it. People who think they're not hurting the morale of the troops and emboldening our enemies by not supporting what the troops are doing - i.e., "I support the troops but not the war" - are kidding themselves. If the country was as patriotic today as it was during WWII, this war would have been over by now. As I see it, our troops are fighting the negativity at home as well as the terrorists who would have us all dead. I don't mean to argue or rant, either. I have a lot of respect for you, your passion, your intelligence, and your service.

        Mark

  • Pari Ali
    June 3, 2008

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    Powerful and heartfelt as always Artis words reverberating from right within you. You carry the pain that most men have never felt and rightly should.
    I wish this futile war would end and all others. How much more pain will it cause?

  • eternal-devotion
    June 3, 2008

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    Very Poignant.

    Tremendous poem well thought-out and worded. I feel all the loss that there is in the wars when reading this. You have the greatest ability to express just what every man or woman has been through in a war. You also have expressed my thoughts in such words that I haven't been able to do. You make my attempts at writing about war seem trivial, however my feelings go just as deep. This needed to be stated in the way in which you have done, I am glad that you recieved the gold as it is well deserved. This should be out for all people to read as it states everything so precisely and to the point. Tremendous I thought it was exceptional.


  • MysticalRayne
    June 3, 2008

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    Wonderfully expressive my dear ~ congrats on your win ~ def deserving of the gold

  • Seaquince
    June 3, 2008

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    MY MY... this is best just to be read and for us to ponder upon our own guilts of not always looking for ways to make peace both in personal life and worldly life...


  • jbbrandi
    June 3, 2008
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    Just...simply amazing. I'm speechless. Your words....they're...just wow.

  • Jokerman
    June 3, 2008

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    excellent

    expendable losses spent on lost causes;that just about sums it up;young lives wasted for some political idea.these words needed to be written you have produced a quality piece.


  • Alasar Minoko
    June 2, 2008

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    Adding this to favorites, and I hope you put this much devotions into both your memories of those who have passed and to your writing. You have greatly earned my respect for what little that means. I shall happily read more of your writings.


  • Iris Doyle
    June 2, 2008
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    very interesting. like nothing ive ever read before

  • JWGoethe
    June 2, 2008

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    A strong and well written piece. Though I don't usually go much for political commentary, the strength of this kept me reading. Well done. As a vet myself, I can say that it is very affecting and effective.


  • ScarletO gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    An amazing tribute to the greatest gift anyone can give. Wonderful. Congratulations on the gold.


  • InMyOwnGlassBox
    June 2, 2008

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    I am speachless. the death of a soldier is... i would say pointlss, but they died doing what they believed in.
    I have Family burried in Arlington, a great great uncle. yea, i never knew him, but i am prod to claim to be his kin. I love this poem and hope for many more


  • shakira206
    June 2, 2008
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    I like it

    This is a very nice poem and I think you should keep writing!


  • Karen Layne
    June 2, 2008

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    wow...a chastisment that s softened in beauty. Well written, well worded. Strong and yet softly lovely. There's a faint jarring between the first stanzas and the last ones where it becomes personal - verb tense, pronouns and the like - that is slightly, temporarily distracting, but all in all a lovely piece and a lovely sentment.


  • Soft-Rain
    June 2, 2008

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    This is an amazing! Sad and tugged at my heart,I lost a dear friend that was a veteran last year, he was an amazing person.
    Now my son is enlisted so i am proud but afraid at the same time.

    Congrats on this well deserved gold!!!

    Hugs
    ~Lisa~


  • CrescentMoon
    June 2, 2008

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    You gave me chills, this poem is amazing. The personal touch of using his name is my favorite part. It makes me remember the loses my own family has suffered...and allows me to rejoice that my parents did not fall. The title must ring true for everyone whose ever known the soldiers' pain...their true suffering.
    In short, this is a rare poem that makes people pause and think. You deserve the gold you received.


  • artis
    June 2, 2008
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    To: Marluxia-Thanks for almost nothing


  • Chanson belle
    June 2, 2008
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    very powerful
    really makes you think about memorial day and how people spend it now


  • SuicidalLover
    June 2, 2008

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    A very deep, sad and painful poem. I don't like to think of war....how I sit here, somewhat safe, and another may die protecting people they've never met.

    A truly well deserved on gold Congrats to you.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • FollowingFate
    June 2, 2008

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    We are learning about wars right now in my history class. We just finished the Vietnam War, but we haven't done the Iraqi one yet. I used to think that wars were stupid suicide missions, but after learning what they are all about and why they were fought, I feel very fortunate to be able to have the freedoms that I do. It gives the American flag a makeover. Most people who criticize the war are ignorant to what it's all about. After understanding it, it's eerie to think that so many lives were lost just so I could live mine the way I want. It's a chilling thought. I hope your poem makes other people think as well. It was a great write with lots of emotion.


  • z etoile
    June 2, 2008
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    Absolutely beautiful write!


  • Whispering-Night
    June 2, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Amazing Work!!!


  • peridotPixi
    June 2, 2008

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    i thought i read this poem before, but im not seeing my comment, i really love the wonderful deatils you have put into this great piece of work, its amazing, as an army wife, this poem touched my heart deeply, as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • peridotPixi
    June 2, 2008
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    congratulations ~Amy


  • artis
    June 2, 2008
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    Thank you ever so much for the gold trophy, membership, drawings, poems, backgrounds, you tube video. It is truly appreciated. I am moved by your response to allow true heroes to be spotlighted in such a unique way. As well as by your acceptance of a type


  • N e a r
    June 2, 2008

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    Congratulations, you are the winner of The Ultimate Goal!

    I am going to put this up on both the Featured Poems and nominate it for front page. It is well deserved... Please read the contest page for my response to your winning entry.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    In the draft-driven sixties,
    stand in the town square
    shouting your words
    thru a meagaphone.
    In present day,
    stand before your
    digital/video camera,
    loudly shouting your words
    in today's internet microphone,
    the media levelling wonder that is YouTube.

    Perhaps the networks will pick it up
    sending your voice further, adding more
    coverage than a paltry weekend hour on CNN,
    "This Week at War." 24 hours a day at war, side-by-side
    with those who obey the orders, giving of themselves,
    that's what we need to spread influence for those
    who seemingly have none.

    Bravo, artis.
    You speak not only for the 4,000
    but the multi-thousands forever wounded
    and maimed in the quesr for oil control.

    Aesthete


  • passionate-poet
    April 14, 2008

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    thank you for the emotional share .. im glad to see that someones payin attention to our soldiers plight you did a great job expessing the strenuous emotions and people that take them for granted


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 14, 2008

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    along poem that tells a small story. no one cares about the heros. It really shows a picture and alot of strength in it.!well done.check out my poems x!


  • Melodies
    April 14, 2008

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    One of the best poems on this subject that I have read on this site or anywhere. War poems are among my favorite poems... war poems from World War I, especially. This poem reaches into the reader's heart and pulls especially well, truly. Covers much for pondering and appreciating.

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