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Speaking Of Which.....

"The day we lose our need for dreams is the day the human race forfeits its soul." -John Chiam


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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    April 16, 2008

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    Quite Nice

    Nice little well penned version of a poem here Rae. I like your complexity to this quote and how you came up with your conclussion. any ways not sure how I would interrept the quyote but good work & good luck with the contest


  • Tattboyspet
    April 15, 2008
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    thank you for your entry


  • CountryCousin
    April 14, 2008

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    Interesting take.

    You have an interesting take on the quote. I think that many times the words that are not said are the best words indeed. You did a good job.


  • lovelight05
    April 14, 2008

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    Great poem. I really liked how you managed to say so much in just a few simple words. It just shows how powerful words really are.
    I also really liked your title.

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