He's got his weaknesses.
They turn him green.
But, he is the cutest guy I've ever seen.
He rocks,
with his cold stone eyes
that just adore me.
He has
a chin of granite
and biceps
that bend steel.
He is the full meal deal.
His skyscraper
I ride
until
it rains
him
inside me.
Bullets don't
faze him.
I've shot a few
his way.
He just loves me,
anyway.
So, superman and kryptonite
go take a flight
Becuz' he's my hero
every day and night.
Author notes
Mix of Option 1 and 2
A contest entry
- ENTER HERE, IF PROMPTING IS DESIRED by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 14, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
Comments
-
wow, so stunning. I really like the pome and amazing use of words. Thanks so much for entering.
-
-
Thank you, Amazing Grace.
You made this day special for me. I love the recognition. Thank you for letting me participate. I will return the favor and check out your work in the future
-
Adding your comment:
