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Sharp as Glass



As if a sharp and shattered glass
It cuts and tears 'til blood is shed
The hellish wounds that it can give
Will leave one scarred from foot to head
No blade or sword can maim the soul
And leave the spirit rent apart
As jagged edges honed by lies
That come from this, a broken heart.






Rakerman

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  • celadia
    June 18, 2008
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    You're just so talented.


  • Never Fall in Love
    June 17, 2008
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    so simple ... yet so goddamn beautiful


  • BelleMorte gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    I love it

    I love it, can relate and understand. Very well writen.


  • SandraMVeinot
    April 15, 2008

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    Christ is always there to hear and heal our tears...

    wrote beautifully....
    thank u 4 the read here in this afternoon...

    . well done.