I lay here awake at night
These tears too hard to fight
Need you here holding me tight
To wake up to your eyes shinning bright
Your lips I need to taste
Long kisses, no haste
Lets not let time go to waste
Lets make love slow-paced
I want to spend all night and day in bed
On your chest lay my head
Not another tear will be shed
Knowing we will soon be wed
To start a family some day
And still be together when our kids move away
In your arms is where I want to stay
Long after we are old and grey
Any advice?
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wow. such a sense of longing in this poem. deep emotion, for sure. well penned.
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Wow~~
Ooooooooh this one grabs and tugs at the Heartstrings
Wonderful weaving of words~
Your lips I need to taste
Long kisses, no haste
Lets not let time go to waste
Lets make love slow-paced
These lines grab~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wow I think this is incredible!! A true lovers dream! Something that seems to be pretty rare these days but yet so special when it happens! Keep the faith and I am sure it will happen for you!! Excellent work!
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when you live for today, tomorrow can be your reality
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very sweet with longing !! well done
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