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[ Im held in his arms ]

Im held in his arms
Ever so tight
We will fall in love
Ever so Right

He kisses my cheek
ever so light
I know he loves me
He's ever so right

I sit and think
About him all the time
Because of this
It's what makes me rhyme

He's very caring
And also sweet
For me
He's quite a treat

No one as caring
I'll ever find
He's ever so lovable
That's why he sticks in my mind

I fall deeper
Into this love we got
Just love me forever
Because i love you alot

No hearts will break
Not over a little fight
Forever we'll last
Cause together were right

You fill the hole in my heart
Just from my dreadful past
So take care of me
So this love will last

Endless dreams
As my lights go dim
Thinking of my love
It will always be him

In the future...

I wake up
From sleeping in bed
I feel a soft kiss
Right on my head

He lies next to me
My husband to be
I love him so much
And he loves me

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I LOVE TRAVIS!!!!

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Comments


  • Sound of Madness
    June 9, 2008

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    I like how you say "Ever so right" it sounds old timey, and very cute. It's an adorrible work, and I really do like it.


  • t-w-s
    June 8, 2008
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    A lie


  • Quill Bill
    May 12, 2008

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    hey thats really good, the rhyming seems a bit forced in places but it great for your age, i find it helps me to read poem out loud that way it's easyer to see where you trip over a rhyme, anyway well done