we exchanged sleep
for commerce
Author notes
Prompt::
"The day we lose our need for dreams is the day the human race forfeits its soul."
-John Chiam
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired by Tattboyspet.
1000 points, ended April 15, 2008, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty would be lovely
Comments
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Nice take on the prompt... Well thought and said. Good luck to you!
Ken
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Five words to ponder.
Best luck to you in the contest.
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Right on sister. The world expects more from us as we have less and less to give.
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I just had to read this entry when I saw you had entered a poem in her contest and if this is your poem....holy shit batman, you've said more than a mouthful in so few words
YOU are a truly talented poet 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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I will not be commenting on any entry until closing, but I will say thank you for your entry
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