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Truth





Deeds can't,
what dreams do.




Author notes

Prompt: The day we lose our need for dreams is the day the human race forfeits its soul."
-John Chiam


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  • KayJay
    April 14, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt... Good luck to you!
    Ken


  • WomanWriting
    April 14, 2008
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    So true. Best luck to you in the contest.

    WW


  • Three Doves
    April 14, 2008
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    A fine web spun! A wonderful piece of poetry!
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • Tattboyspet
    April 14, 2008
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    I will not be commenting on any entries before closing, but I will say thank you for your entry