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Utopia

Humanity
Set free
A dream

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5 words to the prompt.
PROMPT:
"The day we lose our need for dreams is the day the human race forfeits its soul."
-John Chiam

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  • KayJay
    April 14, 2008
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    Nice take on the prompt, Jeff... Good luck to you!
    Ken


  • WomanWriting
    April 14, 2008
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    Best luck to you in the contest.



    WW


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    April 14, 2008
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    nice. short but sweet, and sets forth a thought that can interpreted alot of ways. very well done.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Five excellent words...perhaps another place to dream...five more


  • Corvus Corone
    April 14, 2008
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    Wow didn't think you were one for the shorties Jeff, nice take on the prompt though. xxx


  • Tattboyspet
    April 14, 2008

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    I will not be commenting on any of the entries until closing, but I will say thank you for your entry

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