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Hurt


The name calling,
The accusations.

Words thrown in anger,
Caught by the innocent beraking heart.

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  • james119
    May 24, 2008

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    This is a painful write, I hope it's not about you...

    The poem... I would tighten it up a little... but that's just me.

  • celadia
    May 23, 2008
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    'breaking' I think you meant, not 'beraking' nice, short and simple says it all in so few words.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 19, 2008
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    awe... I know this to well. Yes it is probly best to go.


    Delila


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    When it reaches this point it's time to go, past time.