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Pierced...

Smiling, happy, just as it should be
So much pain has gone before.
Make the most of every minute
Each day she grows to love you more...

An expression of pure joy upon you
A childlike twinkle in your eye.
So many hours lost in history
Drowned out by one devoted smile...

As you draw closer to your baby
I watch, my eyes awash with tears.
Behind a smile that’s happy for you
My heart is pierced by a million spears...

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Seeing someone that you love being 'dad' invariably makes you sad that you will never be a 'mum'...

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  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    June 10, 2008

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    Treasure

    In my eyes you have directly and beautifully expressed a largeness of love, bigger even than the example you have so perfectly chosen to point at it.
    I believe that this pure quality, of acceptance and love as I read it here, is a real one. A 'quality' of beauty in Reality which we can also find inside our own selves.

    Pierced,

    Sol


    • Dreanne
      June 11, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your comment Sol, am not writing much at the mo, touch of the old writers block i think!, but your encouragement is very much appreciated...

      Thanks again

      Sam


  • Dreamana
    April 25, 2008
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    Wow

    Keep us the good work, this is so profound.