He lifts his drink to his lips
He raises his hand curled in a fist
A contest entry
- Another prompt from me... by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so sad that a drink brings out unharnessed emotion in such a way that normally would be suppressed and dismissed in a sober state
Joe -
Isn't it how it always is? It's sad what the world has come to.
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WOW! I can really relate to this, well said in so few words,
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good write Jen. We've all seen and some of us been in that stance before. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest
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I've seem this too often with out the drink
Roses to you Jen
Teresa
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does not the one often begat the other??
Joe
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sheesh! short and VERY powerful!
amazing imagery here my friend (and I'm glad to see you are back
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Enough said in just a few words hun!
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
Love you
~Manda
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