9 years of my life I gave,
you pissed them all away,
here I sit and write alone,
the man I am today.
I write of a tale of lust,
and trust, a heart broken in two,
a tale of a sad, lonely broken man,
that is all thanks to you.
We grew up together,
I remember then,
as children we played,
as adults lust set in.
In high school you were a knock out,
which made me wonder why,
someone as beautiful as you,
could fall for such a average guy.
I was young and confused,
the drugs I done would ease the pain,
once that high wore of,
it was once back again.
A father drank to much,
for his son he did not care,
was never the one to look,
to for answers when you found life unfair.
But you were my ray of hope,
my rope out of this black pit,
A body of a goddess, stood before me,
and would let me sleep with it.
You really knew how to make me feel,
good with that body of yours,
my lust, I began to trust,
I should of taken a mental pause.
listened to my friends, the ones who told,
me you were no good from the start,
I should of told Sky I loved her
the real owner of my heart.
I will never forget the words,
I said to Sky, the hurt that filled her eyes,
I hated how within I knew she was telling the truth,
but I told her she was telling lies.
You are nothing but a jealous little whore,
are the last things I had to say,
its been 11 years now since I’ve seen Sky,
she left the very next day.
I stuck by you to the very end,
turned my back on my friends,
watched close friendships that,
I once had come to hated ends.
All that did not matter,
a father I was going to be soon,
I worked my heart out to give her the things I never had,
my joy was up to the heights of the moon.
But it did not turn out like that Becky was never born,
my baby girl never took her first breath,
I wanted to see her so badly,
I tried to make my very own death.
I never did go through with it,
I felt her little hand and her cry did appear,
like her saying Daddy do not do this,
your own family need you here.
I love you daddy all so much,
tell mommy I love her too,
I will be growing up here in heaven,
daddy, being your angel watching everything you do.
Months past things got even worse,
Stephanie decided to go out tonight,
I thought hell it will be good for her,
maybe things will turn out alright.
I got a call from Amy,
told me I should come over right away,
I walked into the party,
she pointed up into the bedroom,
there you were sucking away.
With my a best friend you bitch,
how the hell could you do such an act.
Don't tell me to calm down,
you had a friends penis in your mouth,
how do you want me to react.
You were doing this with a friend,
of mine and I am getting carried away,
as for my friend Ryan he suffered a broken rib,
busted nose, and many other injury's on that day.
I left you I did not care,
that you were drunk,
I have grown up now Stephanie,
no longer do I listen to that junk.
I just want everyone to know,
the hurt you have put me through,
I am a drunk and a mess,
and its all thanks to you.
Author notes
Old write i found in a black book thought I should put it down on here its how i once felt once was but hey have not had a drink in almost month and a half and i do not feel like one Iver and also these feelings i am letting go of as I doubt she does what I done to myself over hurt so in short and sweet terms fuck her I am moving on :-)
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An amazing poem. I like the story style of it.
This is what I wanted. The pain and anguish really comes through. What a bitch is all I can say.
I'm glad you've found a way through this, and managed to stay clean.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
Sunny
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Thankful
Thankful that you did move on, I get the Honor of being you AP Wife. I am so lucky to have such a caring, loving, husband. You help me through so much I wish I could repay you for all that you have done for me.
There is something I need to tell you
it's what I did tonight
I asked someone to help you
to heal and make it right
I know your in dismay
this is what I had to say
I come to you twice in a day
on my knees just to pray
please will you go to him
take his hurt & pain away
This is a hard time for him
he feels like he cant win
please give him the strength
for this i really do thank
he is one of kind dear lord
his heart was torn apart
but yet even then
he was still my true friend
You owe him this one you know
he always has faith in you
please don't let me down
This time you owe me a few.
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wow... theres certianly ALOT of emotion behind this..... my heart pours out to you.... i can't imagine how you dealt with this... its got to be SO HARD... i'm here to tlak if you ever want... and i'm proud of you that you haven't drank in over a month! congrats!! i know this doesn't really make you feel a whole lot better hwen it happens.. but maybe now that your healing abit... no girl is worth your tears, and if she is, she will never make you cry. ... i ohpe that you learn to forgive... because its only in forgiveness that we find healing... and i'm praying for you...
alright enough with my blabbering.. aobut the write itself..... second stanza... 3rd line.. i thikn you want Tale instead of tail... just a thought... its rather long.. but i'm thinkin this is more of a rant than anything else so thats ok... i LOVe the emotion that shines throughout this whole piece... and i'm really iimpressed that you kept a rhyme up throughout it all even through that pain.... defineetly an AWSOME write!! if you ever want to tlak about anything... i'm here to listen and just know that you are an awsome writter and people do care!!!!
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Wow - speachless. You took my breath away with all your raw emotion and I just wanna give you a hug! Just....wow
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Powerful write, bro. Intense, full of anger and the events of what brought that anger to life, but also a progression toward letting go and healing, which is great. I know it's an old write. Isn't it nice to visit old writes and realize how much you have grown since you wrote them?
Your Sister from Another AP Mother,
Kimberly G, FNB
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Wow
This poem has dsuch sadness,pain, betrayal, hatred and heartbreak. I almost cried while reading yor words thinking tomyself how I'd feel going through this amd realized my stiry isnt too different and thinking of that pain it just touched me.Im so soory for your loss and the pain you went through. I hope all is better now.Best wishes to you and take care.
~Kisses & Roses~
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Wow
this is an extremely emotional piece; inwhich unfortunately we all go through atleast once in our life. the cursing made it more intense- it held my interest from beginning to end. A great read* -
YOUR # 1
HEY THERE ROCK-STAR GREAT POEM ...YOUR # 1 IN MY BOOK. HOW HOW I CAN RELATE. I CAN'T PICK JUST A COUPLE LINES FROM THE POEM...IT WAS ALL GOOD. I HAD TO MOVE ON TOO...OH HOW IT SUCKS...ALL WELL FUCK IT RIGHT! YOUR A BAD ASS GREAT JOB.
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Whoa. I relate to this in an odd way. This is a very strong write. I really liked it. it's sad but well written. It seems like you just wrote. Not thinking just put your feelings down.thta is hard to do sometimes but very nice job. I hope you're healing well. (:
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Holy shit.
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This is a very powerful and emotional piece. It is truly sad that people have to go through these kinds of things in life, but what can really be said about the nature of humanity and the things we do to hurt one another? I know how hard it is to go through these kinds of emotions, to have to deal with addiction because of someone else's shameless acts. But we choose, it is us, we decide our fate and I am only happy that you have begun the long road to recovery. Good luck to you, and very good write!
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James you have my messages and you my dear brother are much stronger am proud of you ..got it right kick it in the butt open the door to the FUB Depart and slam the damn door....move on way to go james.
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my lust, I began to trust--- LOVE that line!
this is a good write, long but holds the readers intrests and seems to encapsulate your story and emotions in it, it works very cool.
and can i just say congrats on no longe drinking, that is an amazing effort and you should be very proud!
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James I can not tell you how PROUD I am to read you saying You are moving on!
& you haven't had a drink in a month and a half ... even PROUDER of you babes
This write is fantastic as is everything you pen, couple spelling errors but nothing that takes away the strength you have deep inside
Stand tall and proud James, you are better than her and you prove it everyday
SMILE
♥
Stay safe
Love you
~Manda
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