here i stand
knife in my hand
the calander reads 14.2.08
her screams now reduced to fearful sobs
for a second i am motionless
and then i look at her walls
pictures of him and her surround me
the fire in my eyes melts my frozen stanse
i grip the knife so tight my nuckles go white
and in that moment i know what i have to do
i slashed her throat with the shining blade
she took her last choking gasp
and her body went limp
but still the river of blood wasnt enough to satisfy me
i thrust the metal into her heart
then into her back
i hope she could feel the pain in her death
now she will know how i feel each passing day
he's mine now.
i look at her body,
laying cold on the floor
covered in a pool of blood
i scream
what had i done?
the hatred contoled me
i have killed someone
panic settled in around me
paranoia seeped into my head
instead of fleaing
i took the stained knife
i wasnt afraid,
i knew it wouldnt hurt,
i looked brefily at the knife, then
lunged it into my chest
but i felt no pain
my heart had been broken long before that night.
Author notes
well i guess i feel a little angry at the moment...
and the only way to take it out is on the poem.
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This poem is greatly written with dark, harming intentions. So intense.
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so dark so much hate ... so intense
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angst and the tone of the dark moment unravels in this well narrated piece.
Keep sharing your gift.
HENSLEY
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lurv it
omg THAT WAS Awesome i like it alot JEALOUSE OF UR POETRY SKILLS GRA GRA
lol omg i was writing in caps btw if you dont tell me who u like im gonna rip my eye balls out nah love this poem lurv u xox kt
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sweet
this is amazing.
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omg my fave by u! i love this! hella good!
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awesome
a little grusome in parts but none the less awesome I LOVE the last line that was the perfect finish!!!
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