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Temptation

Sultry
Longing eyes
Lust in heels
Bare shouldered intoxicating glance

If only in my youth...

 

 

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  • Tam
    April 15, 2008

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    oh damn...

    this is HOT...
    LOL
    you go girl...
    and I'm certain you are in your prime baby...
    well done!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 14, 2008
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    Very sensual and vivid in detail... x


  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    Wow this was great!! I really like the idea of lust in this with a little bit of sensuality. Awesome write & good luck in the contest!


  • penman gold member
    April 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and wonderful word choice for the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.