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My Heart Is Weak, He Knows What He Does

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He breathes,
And I faint
He is moon,
And I wane;

Invisible like the wind

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04-14-08

prompt ~ He knows what he does

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  • QuarryGirl
    April 14, 2008

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    Disjointed words that mend together to force the feeling, even so fleeting a one as this. Breath. His breath. Excellent.