Goodbye is coming.
He knows I know
he’s dying.
I, no longer hide the tears
or the pain.
Author notes
I hope you don't mind...I took more of a I KNOW prompt form your prompt...which has come from very recent ( as in today ) news, that our dog is dying of cancer and doesn't have very long left with us
---unfortunately and very sadly I update this..Our dog Tama 11 yr's old, passed away at round 6pm on 14th april 2008
He will always be in our hearts and foreva loved.
I am glad your prompt gave me some things to get out in poetic form Thank you
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So Sad
This is so heartbreaking and I'm truly sorry for your loss, hun. You expressed your love and feelings very well. It is so good to get those feelings out, all our feelings.
I no longer hide the tears
or the pain!!
I so do understand how you feel.
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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This is so very sad and I'm sincerely sorry for your loss.. x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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thank you
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thats soooo sad
may gods love be with you always
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Thank you so much
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Awww
I'm so sorry to hear sis!! What a beautiful piece of sadness you have penned. I'm glad this helped!
x
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This is such a lovely write and i wish you all the best in the contest. Sorry to hear about your dog, that is always a terrible thing to happen, especially as we get so attached to them. So sorry to hear that.
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Thank you darl
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sending you an extra special This comes from the *heart* Love J
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I really need it right now...cause he is gone
II am relieved but heart broken at the same time but thankful for all the friends that have shown such great love and caring
Thank you
Cin
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That is very hard. I had 5 dogs die in one year. My favorite, Jackson, had an anurisum while at the vet. That was 2 years ago, I still cry over him. You are in my prayers. Great poem. great.
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Oh gosh 5 in one year...don't know how I would contemplate that let alone what I am going through..
Thank you so much for your understanding and prayers, kindly appreciated
Cindy
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